Mr. X, 1st year student of University Y, from KL for example. Who is active in various programs and activity.
But, how can you write that down? It wouldn't be so interesting.
Mine was bad.
So, what is my selling point? In what way do I sound good? It seems like I'm nothing but my past. Come to think about it, I've been so busy, day and night, but where actually am I going? What are my goals? What do I want to achieve?
Study is a must. I just have to do it. But everyone else are studying too. What makes me different from them? There are thousands of overseas students here and there. But I don't want to be someone in the thousand bunch. (Again, boring~) Getting a just a degree is not enough, and being just a mediocre wouldn't get me anywhere.
It is not a good thing when people don't remember your name (or even you as a person).
So, what is your selling point? What makes you different than others?